This could've easily been a 5 if you put in more inbetweens
This could've easily been a 5 if you put in more inbetweens
The animation needs some work, but it was really funny.
I was more in a rush to tell the joke rather the quality of it. its done in 12 fps, so less drawings.kinda like limited animation tricks i guess. i have no training but love it, an am working on 24 fps.. its a learning curb to get the timing and other stuff to work. but sometimes i like the crapy animation as it sometimes enhances the joke im telling . Anyways. working on a few shorts. .ty again for the feedback.
Good writing, But the lip synch of Bill Cosby isn't very good
We will try better next time. Thanks for watching!
This was pretty good, the animation is pretty well done, some parts are a bit odd like the way the feet slide during the walk cycles. All together though good job
Yeah, I know what you're talking about with the walk cycles. I need to move away from tweening the cycle across the screen, 'cause it doesn't look right all the time. Or maybe it's because the walk cycles are on two's and the tween is on one's that it slides like that? Probably a mix of both, honestly.
Thanks!
Haha great story
Loved this man...colors were appealing throughout the episode, I really like how you implemented the 3D elements. Some parts of the animation could have been a little smoother, like the sequence at 5:25 I feel like that could have been so much more epic. But other than that great job man. I'm definitely a fan now.
Thanks! Good point. That's because I was forced to animate this in 12 fps instead of 24, since otherwise it wouldn't match up with the first half. :)
Nice job this is pretty funny
Haha this is great the backgrounds in parts were amazing..The beginning started off really slow with some of the characters losing volume after movement, but other than that it was great...Good Job 4.5/5
This was great I think u could enter this in some festivals and do well
These are funny...it's just really hard to hear at some points. I had to mute my tv
Thanks for the feedback. Will work out the audio for better quality.
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Joined on 1/15/16